关于”请老师帮修改“英语作文范文4篇，作文题目：Ask the teacher to revise it。以下是关于请老师帮修改高考英语范文，每篇作文均为高分范文带翻译。

高分英语作文1：Ask the teacher to revise it

"Last Monday, when we were having Chinese class, the teacher suddenly slipped and we were all wored about her. A boy, carrying her on her back, went to the clinic with the of others. We took flowers and fruits to visit her.

We saw her lying on the bed with bandages. We felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon this Thsday. She retned to class in a wheelchair.

We were deeply moved and pud of having such a responsible teacher.

中文翻译：

“上星期一，我们上中文课时候，老师突然滑倒了，我们都很担心她。一个男孩背着她，在其他人帮助下，去了诊所。结果发现她右腿骨折了，第二天她不得不住院，我们带着鲜花和水果去看望她，看到她腿缠着绷带躺在床上，我们为她感到难过，并希望她周四能早康复她坐着椅回到课堂上给我们上课我们都为有这样一位负责任老师而深深感动和自豪。

万能作文模板2：请老师修改一下

It was amazing to see the scene of cockfighting in the cockpit for the first time. It was a Sunday afternoon when I was doing my homework by the window. Suddenly, I saw the big cock and the little Rooster Playing: the big cock, the little Rooster pecked at the cockscomb, but a little oster was leisely on the side of his head.

There was no other big cock's head going back. It pecked the big oster with a slant of his lip A pair of swollen eyes looked at a little oster. His neck sank and he was ready to fight.

Suddenly, the big oster jumped out of his sharp claws. The little oster was falling on the gund. Big cock, taking advantage of this time, looked back at the little cock's neck.

The blood came down fm the neck of the little cock and the upper class society. I was shocked The little oster, who was about to him pass by, suddenly pressed the little cock on the gund. The big cock and the big oster ted their best to jump up and refused to give one of them to stand up.

No one dared to gather stren and attack each other while looking for opportunities. Suddenly, o osters pulled out their in mouths and rushed to the opposite side. Their fo wings fluttered in the air, and the fallen feathers floated home in the air, My heart for a long time can not calm day and night to watch the scene of cockfighting in my mind.

中文翻译：

第一次看到斗场斗场面真是令人惊讶那是一个星期天下午，我正在窗边做作业，我突然看到大公和小公竟然在玩：大公，小公对着冠啄了一下，但一只小公悠闲地侧着头，没有其他大公头往回走，它将嘴唇斜了一啄，正好啄了一下大公眼睛，大公哭了，发起了怒火，一双肿胀眼睛看着一只小公，小公也毫不示弱，脖子一沉，正准备战斗，突然大公跳出锐利爪子，小公正扑倒在地，大公，趁这一次小公回头看小公脖子，血从小公脖子和上流社会下来了，我大吃一惊，正要帮它过去小公突然使劲把小公压在地上，大公、大公使出浑身解数，不肯给一个站起来就跳了起来，没人敢一边积蓄力量一边互相攻击一边寻找机会突然两个公拔出铁嘴向对方扑过去，四只翅膀在空中扑腾而来，被羽毛在空中飘荡回家，我心久久不能平静夜观看斗场景在我脑海中出现。

满分英语范文3：请老师帮修改

My mother my mother is an English teacher. She likes listening to English radio and reading English newspapers. She always gets up early in the morning, washes her face and has breakfast.

Then she goes to school in a hry. She does morning exercises with her students. Second, she has one or o English classes in the afternoon.

She s some students learn English. Finally, she goes home at five o'clock and does homework for students at home. She does homework ry day.

I love my mom and I hope she can relax on the weekend.

中文翻译：

我我是一名英语老师，她喜欢听英语广播和读英文报纸她总是早上起得很早洗完脸吃早饭她匆匆上学她和学生一起做早第二，她下午有一两节英语课，她帮助一些学生学习英语最后，她五点钟回家，在家给学生做作业，她每天都在做作业。我爱我，我希望她能在周末放松一下。

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